A CRIME - BY FERRAN ALVAREZ

A CRIME

Draft:

• P1
• People shopping in Gucci
• 20 persons and three burglars
• Looking clothes
• P2
• The burglars started putting clothes in their bags
• 3 burglars
• And they started running trought the street
• P3
• Segurity guard caught the gang
• People were afraid

Words to use:

• At first
• Unexpectedly
• Then
• When suddenly
• While
• In the end

WRITING:

On last Saturday, a group of 20 people was shopping in a store of Barcelona, Gucci. In this group, there were three infiltrated thieves. People were looking for clothes quietly.

But suddenly, the crime started and the three burglars were putting so many pices of clothes in their backpacks. Then, they started running trought the street and the security guard in their backs. The persecution frightened many people. 

In the end, the security guard, with the help of the police, stopped the three burglars. People around the scene were so scared and the police tried to ressure the streets. Now a days, the thieves there are in the prision and the clothes in the store, so the case was solved succesfully.